Every summer I go to phoenix,Arizona to visit my dad. So in the morning at four o' clock in the morning at the airport. Waiting for my plane . I would arrive in Sky Harbor airport at eight o' clock . Then I would have to go get my luggage down stairs. I would have to go to the elevator and go to the 8th floor to my dad's truck.Thursday, February 24, 2011
Every summer By Daniel Kalar-Goetschius
Every summer I go to phoenix,Arizona to visit my dad. So in the morning at four o' clock in the morning at the airport. Waiting for my plane . I would arrive in Sky Harbor airport at eight o' clock . Then I would have to go get my luggage down stairs. I would have to go to the elevator and go to the 8th floor to my dad's truck.
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Daniel- Are you finished with your story? Is your story about how you had to get ready early in the morning or the actual summer visit? I would like to read more about what it is like in Arizona Please go back and look over your story. Read each sentence out loud and make sure each one expresses a complete thought. -Miss L
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